I liked this novel. Story and plot is very original plus music with character arts done great. It is a pity that not many people aware of this gem. Hope that you will make a catchy art on this project itchio page which will attract people and novel will be popular
Hello 柒仔, I am more than happy to help translate/correct grammar of "Aslan time" I really like the game I hope it continues to be a good Visual novel :D, if you'd like me to help out, my twitter is @SmolWafol
The English is a bit rough in places as expected/disclaimed. So far worst thing is that what should be referred to "beast/anthro -kin" is "orcs". I don't know if this a translation or cultural translation issue (Orcs may mean something else in/to your language/people???). A CG to show what the Main Character looks like is good, separate from the image in the textbox corner. Some parts the English is butchered so badly I'm even having hard time trying to decipher it! X3, yes I'm finding it humorous for once. Oh tiger has my first name! I'm not one for sports, but you have clearly studied how basketball works! Its not necessary but you could have an overlay image with just heads of the characters as icons to show how they are moving around from one line of script to the next (the players that aren't the main character could just have similar colors to their team color, but be outlined with species. Two characters talk with names displayed, when they have not been introduced to the Main Character yet. Also the characters are being suddenly called widely varied different names compared to the name they were introduced as. Going to need someone who speaks both languages to comb though the English version to make sure all the correct syntax is used. There is no rush for the proper translation, focus on your own language for now. This will make it easier to focus on the English later.
My English is not good, I use a web translator to communicate with you, there may be grammatical errors, please understand: if you need a correct translation, it will cost a lot of money and energy on our side, (we have one or two meanings of a word on our side, except for polyphonic words (multiple pronunciations of a word)) (most of your words in our place require four or five words to explain, or even more; So it's hard for us to explain a word in English) (you can try the Chinese to English to Chinese to English translation on the website, and repeat it a few times to see the result)
Hello! You can use DeepL to translate Chinese to English and vice versa with high accuracy. It should come in handy when you're writing patch notes, or translating the game's description
The arts look great so far! Looking forward to the English version
The story about the two races being at peace, yet still struggle to coexist together is very intriguing. I would love to read this novel, but sadly I can't read Chinese. I also love the artwork for this visual novel.
Oh gosh, I'm sorry for implying a sense of pressure for basically asking an English version (It was giving an inkling of me wanting an English version, because I bolded some words in my previous comment). I didn't meant to sound insensitive, and it can be tedious whenever someone ask if the game can be translated. Terribly sorry for my rudeness, and yes I can certainly wait. This is your project, and you get to do whatever you like with it. Keep it up!
I haven't played the game yet, but it looks promising, the story seems interesting, all you need for now is to keep working on the game for now and maybe get a translator / proof-readers 😄
All good. I think with MAC computer its a different file needed. The file might work on Iphone but would not work on a apple computer. But happy to help test see if it works.
Hi, Yep can load the game, just realised theres no english version so cant play. If you did want to get translations you can ask see if anyone can do it. I dont mind doing it but would be copy and paste in to a translate site.
人物真的画得太好看了！我翻了一点点让我不会中文的订阅者看一下。The characters look amazing! I just translated the game a little to let my subscribers who do not read Chinese to have a look.
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什么时候更新啊？别像别的一样不完结，很期待。
都停了一年了,怕是有点困难了
i cant find the english version
where the english version???
大大. 1.6版這裡少了一些對話喔
啊，抱歉，那里应该是后面改的时候没删干净
<--- 正在等待告白+接吻的場景 ~_~
Where is the english port
question where did all English translation go?
Hope one day it gets translated to English.
Okay so where's the translated English part ? Says that there Is but I can't find it anywhere after downloading
I liked this novel. Story and plot is very original plus music with character arts done great. It is a pity that not many people aware of this gem. Hope that you will make a catchy art on this project itchio page which will attract people and novel will be popular
作者大大可以弄一个好感度功能吗
love Tiger!!!
安卓版的要花钱吗？
Hello 柒仔, I am more than happy to help translate/correct grammar of "Aslan time" I really like the game I hope it continues to be a good Visual novel :D, if you'd like me to help out, my twitter is @SmolWafol
可以吗？可是我没法支付报酬
抱歉，一直没有看itch的评论
一直很懶.沒上來回報~~
大大.1.41版.這裡有問題喔
1次只能傳1張圖
這裡~~
下一張變成
不好意思，我马上去改
重傳的話.聽說好像得重買.下個版本修改就好囉
好
最近真的懶過頭.剛剛才玩完1.41
我以為大大是改成先把其中一人的路線徹底完成.
然後再換下一人.
可是如果改成目前這樣.
埃文的新劇情就要等4個月後才有~
到時可能已經忘記之前的劇情了 Q_Q
现在有nsfw内容吗？
沒有喔
The English is a bit rough in places as expected/disclaimed. So far worst thing is that what should be referred to "beast/anthro -kin" is "orcs". I don't know if this a translation or cultural translation issue (Orcs may mean something else in/to your language/people???). A CG to show what the Main Character looks like is good, separate from the image in the textbox corner. Some parts the English is butchered so badly I'm even having hard time trying to decipher it! X3, yes I'm finding it humorous for once. Oh tiger has my first name! I'm not one for sports, but you have clearly studied how basketball works! Its not necessary but you could have an overlay image with just heads of the characters as icons to show how they are moving around from one line of script to the next (the players that aren't the main character could just have similar colors to their team color, but be outlined with species. Two characters talk with names displayed, when they have not been introduced to the Main Character yet. Also the characters are being suddenly called widely varied different names compared to the name they were introduced as. Going to need someone who speaks both languages to comb though the English version to make sure all the correct syntax is used. There is no rush for the proper translation, focus on your own language for now. This will make it easier to focus on the English later.
How did you get the English Version?
Its in the settings/preferences menu, where many VNs have language selection, its somewhere on that page, click around that page and it should adjust!
My English is not good, I use a web translator to communicate with you, there may be grammatical errors, please understand: if you need a correct translation, it will cost a lot of money and energy on our side, (we have one or two meanings of a word on our side, except for polyphonic words (multiple pronunciations of a word)) (most of your words in our place require four or five words to explain, or even more; So it's hard for us to explain a word in English) (you can try the Chinese to English to Chinese to English translation on the website, and repeat it a few times to see the result)
好棒的游戏，期待
微博無法留言.支持先專心完成一條線(先來老虎吧~_~) 我覺得大大會選擇在今天1111更新...(會嗎?@@")
哈哈，已经更新啦，微博不能留言的话我还有B站以及抖音，都叫柒仔想摸鱼
瞭解! 已購買~有機會去B站留言~_~
Hello! You can use DeepL to translate Chinese to English and vice versa with high accuracy. It should come in handy when you're writing patch notes, or translating the game's description
The arts look great so far! Looking forward to the English version
你好!你可以使用DeepL，将中文翻译成英文，反之亦然，而且准确性很高。当你写补丁说明，或翻译游戏说明时，它应该会派上用场。
好的，非常感谢
Okay, thank you very much!
The story about the two races being at peace, yet still struggle to coexist together is very intriguing. I would love to read this novel, but sadly I can't read Chinese. I also love the artwork for this visual novel.
（此评论必须使用翻译）两个种族和平相处但仍然努力共存的故事非常有趣。 我很想看这本小说，可惜我看不懂中文。 我也喜欢这部视觉小说的艺术作品。
Please wait patiently, the English version was made in version 1.2, but it was translated by a translator, I hope you don't mind
（使用翻译）哦，天哪，我很抱歉暗示我基本上要求一个英文版的压力感（这让我暗示我想要一个英文版，因为我在之前的评论中加粗了一些单词）。 我并不是故意让自己听起来麻木不仁，每当有人问游戏是否可以翻译时，这可能会很乏味。 非常抱歉我的粗鲁，是的，我当然可以等。 这是你的项目，你可以用它做任何你喜欢的事情。 保持！
Oh gosh, I'm sorry for implying a sense of pressure for basically asking an English version (It was giving an inkling of me wanting an English version, because I bolded some words in my previous comment). I didn't meant to sound insensitive, and it can be tedious whenever someone ask if the game can be translated. Terribly sorry for my rudeness, and yes I can certainly wait. This is your project, and you get to do whatever you like with it. Keep it up!
没关系啦，我都没有注意看，哈哈哈
It's okay. I didn't even notice.Hahaha
想付款发现没办法这个项目没办法用银联卡，有什么其他途径吗？
我是绑定的PayPal，这个可以用信用卡或者借记卡
Is there gone To Be A English virgin This one just wondering because the it Look To Me It Fun To Play
看得出是诚意满满的作品，慢慢进步就好。加油，会默默支持你的
会的，感谢支持
Hope one day you are able to get an english translation. This looks amazing!
啊啊啊真的好喜欢这个游戏，什么时候更新啊，太短根本不够玩，好喜欢埃文啊啊啊啊啊啊
大概过几天就会更新了，不过会暂时收费一个月，一个月之后才会免费哦，如果不出意外的话，以后大概都是一个月更新一次
想知道大概是怎么个付费法qwq，真的太想玩了
就是支付两美元就可以提前下载，如何访问您的购买 - itch.io
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安卓版在玩時. 回退、快進的選項. 都跑到上面了. 那些選項的字體是白色.
感覺都跟畫面合為一體了 @@" 期待老虎線~~ 辛苦了
啊，我是怕手机版不好按，所以挪到上面了
可以考慮換個位置看看喔.放在上面真的很難看清楚
我把它们放到最下面了，但是仍然会有某个场景进行选项的时候会看不见，不过应该比之前好点
感謝! 期待1.2出來
I haven't played the game yet, but it looks promising, the story seems interesting, all you need for now is to keep working on the game for now and maybe get a translator / proof-readers 😄
如果大家都不介意的话，我下个版本就会用翻译器制作英文版，但是可能会造成阅读困扰
经典应该是我代码太垃圾了，哈哈哈，因为我不是学这些的
Is there a mac version? only see a iphone link which is not compatible with MAC. tried google translate below.
有mac版本吗？ 只看到一个iphone链接，它不与MAC工作。
哦哦，抱歉，因为我不是iPone用户，不知道我上传错了，明天我会上传好的，感谢你提醒
All good. I think with MAC computer its a different file needed. The file might work on Iphone but would not work on a apple computer. But happy to help test see if it works.
一切都好。 我认为与MAC电脑这是需要一个不同的文件。 该文件可能适用于Iphone，但不适用于apple计算机。 但很乐意帮助测试它是否有效。
Hi, Yep can load the game, just realised theres no english version so cant play. If you did want to get translations you can ask see if anyone can do it. I dont mind doing it but would be copy and paste in to a translate site.
嗨，是的，可以在mac上加载游戏，只是意识到没有英文版本，所以不能玩。 如果你确实想得到翻译，你可以问问是否有人可以做到这一点。 我不介意这样做，但将复制并粘贴到翻译网站
我不知道如果我用翻译器制作外语版会不会造成你们的阅读困扰，所以一直不敢做
Onde és a versão Android
上传了，不过暂时需要付费，以及仅支持中文主要是我的外语并不好
我喜欢这个游戏，立绘什么的都很棒
Android? 🤔
非常好游戏，英雄联盟，爱来自瓷器❤️
未有安裝Android, 我會等🙂
而且我已經追隨這遊戲，我很期待可以用Android 玩與更新 😊 我會支持你！😊
人物真的画得太好看了！我翻了一点点让我不会中文的订阅者看一下。The characters look amazing! I just translated the game a little to let my subscribers who do not read Chinese to have a look.
哇，很棒！
This game looks incredible, too bad there's no English support :(
抱歉，我英语不好
买了买了 期待哦！画风感觉好美！
感谢支持
很好的视觉小说，作者要加油鸭
谢谢你的美丽故事……我是一个外国人，正在努力学习汉语，这个故事肯定会帮助我
如果能帮到你，我会感到非常开心！